Cleo was walking with books in her hands,she was not paying attention,she was only walking and looking at the ground,she felt as if she wanted to see someone,for whom she loved.Suddenly she bumped into the right person. * OMMF* With a ploop she fell on the ground ,bumping into kid. she blushed. " Kid!im so sorry,i didnt mean to-" she felt so guilty. " Please,it was an accident,im sorry,for not paying attention either,cleo." he felt a silence and started talking again,this calmed cleo. " You know..i cant see your eyes cleo.." with a warm hand,kid lifted cleo's bangs that flashed cleos turqoise eyes. "Theey are lovely .." Kid blushed and shook his head to get back to earth. "Well..this was intresting.." Kid said wanting to talk to cleo still. " Uh-yeah.. i guess" Cleo looked down and sighed,for she thought that she would never be able to talk to kid like that again. "Well see you in class,cleo!" kid said with a faint smile. "yeah ok!" cleo said blushing. "Alright class thier is a party tonight."Stein said. The Class cheered.
*AT THE PARTY*
Cleo was dressed in a sparkling black dress with a silky white ribbon around her waist,for she knew that kid loved her eyes,she pined up her bangs to everyone could see her real hair,which was a little longer than kid's,it was a darkish brown.Walking into the ball room she was looking around and saw kid,Sighing she knew that she would not be able to dance with him,facting that he probly didnt like her,she thought. Suprised she looked up to hear his voice. "Oh, Hello Cleo,what a suprise to see you." He sat down next to her,and handed her soe punch. "Oh,hey kid" She blushed and recived the punch,that kid brought her." Why so gloom?" kid asked confused. "huh what?!" Cleo straightend up real quick,so kid was not suspisuous. id giggled. "Huh?why are you giggling at me?" Cleo said,bright pnik. "your just cute." Kid said . Suddenly it felt light someone punched cleo in the stomach,for she had butterflies . "R-really?" cleo said unbelived. "haha,yes." Everyone at the party was having a good time,when lord death,clapped his hands to get attention. " Alright Kiddo's Dancey time!, Choose a partner and have some fun dancing!" ..Kid looked amazed and turned over to cleo. Looking down,cleo could feel kid looknig at her. "Would you be my dance partner?".kid said smiling and holding out a hand. "M-me?" Said cleo shivering. "Your the only one here with me,arent you? " kid said laughing. cleo looking up and accepted his hand. "Yeah,i guess..ha." Cleo stood up. A romantic toon went on as they started slow dancing,kid took the lead." Wow some music,huh? " cleo said blushing. "Yes,very intresting." Kid was looking at cleo's outfit amazed.
*IN KID'S MIND*
"how could she look so beautiful?"
"I wonder if she likes me.."
" i guess ill have to ask.."
Cleo was looking down,she didnt dare to look in kid's enchanting eyes,for she would get butterflies.
Kid cleared his through.
"So uh,Cleo." Kid acted brave,for he was nervouse.
Cleo slowly looked up at him.
"Y-yeah?" she was shaking,but not enough for kid to see.
"Do you uh..like me?" Kid looked away,he didnt want to act to desprate.
"If you want to know.." Cleo took a deep breath. "Y-yeaah."and let it out.
Kid smiled.and held cleo by the waist and swayed onto the balcony, were the moonlight shared its glimmer.
Kid looked down at cleo and was grinning.Kid coudnt help just pecking her on the cheek. But he didnt want to seem so quickly.Suddenly her sweet voice started talking.
"K-kid , do you like me?" She said blushing. "I-its ok if you dont its just-uh-." Cleo was stopped by kid.
"I do uh like you,cleo." Kid was blushing.
Suddenly without notice cleo plumped down and started crying,kid was shocked. and got down to his knees.
"But why me? im a witch,everyone fears witches, thier so ugly and cruel.im dont deserve anyone like you,kid." Kid wiped her tears and lifted her up and put her head to his chest. "But your speacial.Your bright,kind, way oppisite of an evil witch, your not evil like a despitful witch." He sat down and craddled her in his arms , and lightly peckedher on the cheek. Cleo was so embarresed and lighlty giggled.Cleo feel asleep into his arms. Kid giggled, she looked so peacful sleeping.
*AFTER THE PARTY*
Kid whispered into cleo's ear "Wake up , My darling.* Cleo eyes slowley opened and she was shocked that she fell asleep in kids arms.She got up quickly. "oh! im sorry i feel asleep!" O_O. " Its alright,you looked peacful ^_^, well the party has ended." Kid said sighing. "Oh..well um i guess i gotta go." Cleo looked down. "Wait! its a friday night,why not stay here with me?" Kid was nervouse. "Oh. ok ^ u ^." Cleo said scrathing the back of her head. Cleo sat next down to kid, kid scooted her over and put his chin over her head. They both waited until midnight. Watching the moonlight . hand in hand. When they had to get sleep.they said thier goodbyes. And went back home.
* At Cleos House*
"Well that was really fun" cleo giggled . Cleo got into her pajamas And layed into her bed and fel asleep easily,dreaming about seeing kid again.
* At Kids house *
* I cant wait to see her again." Kid yawned and got his pajams on, Sulked in bed and was excited to see cleo again.
Hope you liked this! there will be ore
Like? dont know whats up with the preview xD
IT WAS SO GOOD! more more more! haha asap plz
there is more xD in the soul eater gallery , i will make more soon , thanks!
Your form is wrong, in dialogue you are supposed to go to the next line so it isn't as confusing to read. There are a few typos and too much 'blushing' try using his cheeks reddened or he grew hot on his face. And instead of putting the new environments in * * maybe you could change it to like '"Well that was really fun" cleo giggled as she entered her room. It seems a bit rushed so add in somewhere maybe at the balcony they lulled slowly to themselves hugged by the other. Other than that, this is great :3